My first Steem rap challenge post! Give me feedback, how can I get better
Here are the lyrics ;
don't you get your paperwork mixed up with my file system I was going to go easy on you but fuck it now I'm annihilate you. I just graduated from ADB (android debugging Bridge) to cracking into ADT, kicking in your front door dressed up like a cyborg like Terminator, I'm logic bomb, more layers than that Tor router I was going to bring down every network but life would be such a bore without them I need to see an optometrist I'm stuck inside my Oculus Rift my flow is drm-protected so no you cannot copy this shit maybe if you listen to the nerd rapper you wouldn't be a little fucking purse snatcher and I just feel like I'm the shit in the air flying on the back of a pterodactyl and I run this bitch like an Overlord with big cannons like Bulbasaur parents face looking real void with your face on the page of a tabloid I'm more of an Android you're more of an apple boy don't make me slap you boy but I'm not your father me and your mother together together like solder there is no chance of me taking my dick out her mouth like God on his throne you shouldn't bother I was going to go-----("theres more to the song but I cut it out to keep it within the one minute
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